My uncle and his son
This is a picture of my lovely uncle
and his son. He is a good father and good uncle. Let’s know him!
This is Uncle John. Jonh is my uncle. He
older than my mom 2years. Uncle John is a tall man who has blue eyes and short
brown hair. He is handsome man. He is now 41 years old. Uncle John is an
architect. He is smart. His nose is pointed. He has a fair complexion. He always wears a grey or black shirt. He is
good-looking. John is a good uncle. He bought everything that I needed. He
loves me like his daughter.
The
boy next to my uncle is his son. His name is Damon. He is a young boy who has
oval face and b lond hair. His eyes are brown like his father. Damon is lovely
boy. Ha is a good boy. I love him and my uncle so much.
I like this picture in your story.it's show to love.This is well . Good job. Your score is 8/10
ตอบลบI like this picture. They are so cute. Your paragraphs are good and I give you 9/10.
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ตอบลบYour paragraph writing is so good.But your color text is difficult to see. I give you 8/10
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