The Boky bakery house
My favorite place is the Boky Bakery house. It's located in Suphanburi. This place is popular for bakery lover.When I went there I like to eat chocolate cake and milk cake. I like to go there with my sister and her daughter. In this picture above I saw a boy eating a loaf of bread in front of the bakery shop. When I went there I heard a sound of birds and cat. I smelled the cakes,cookies and coffee. The cake was delicious. I like it!. One day, I went to the bakery shop with my sister , While I was eating cake I saw my old friend. She bought the cookies for her boyfriend. We talked little bit. This shop make me feel fresh and happy. I felt relax! I often go the Boky bakery shop 2-3 times a month. I love this place so much.
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